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PostSubject: Afterwards.   Sun Feb 26, 2012 3:31 pm

Prologue

He felt like his eyes were bulging out, and as he shakeably touch his cheeks he noticed tears
had gently rolled on them.

Gently was an understatement, he punched the hot ground trying to rid of the burning pain that the
tears delivered upon his face. The tears were involuntary, he did not mean to 'cry' the word even
sickened him to the core. As the salty remnants fell upon his lips he grunted at the burn and sting.
He carefully moved his right knee closer to his regenerating right arm and placed it on his thigh.
Groaning now, his vision was clearer from when he shut them tight a few minutes ago. His gritted teeth
caused his gums to ache, and they felt heavy altogether. The glance he took at the sunrise as he looked up
with his wavering head, it placed darkness upon his heart. Darkness darker than black.


'They will pay for this.'

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So what do you guys think so far? Who is it in the prologue?
Should I continue Very Happy? Pardon the fact that it's short.


Last edited by Methsia on Sun Feb 26, 2012 4:42 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : I have expanded the Prologue, and if it needs more than that, let me know. I'll be more than happy to put more into it :D)
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PostSubject: Re: Afterwards.   Sun Feb 26, 2012 3:45 pm

Methsia wrote:
Prologue

He felt like his eyes were bulging out, and as he shakeably touch his cheeks he noticed tears
had gently rolled on them.

Gently was an understatement, he punched the hot ground trying to rid of the burning pain that the
tears delivered upon his face. The tears were involuntary, he did not mean to 'cry' the word even
sickened him to the core. As the salty remnants fell upon his lips he grunted at the burn and sting.


'They will pay for this.'

____________________________________

So what do you guys think so far? Who is it in the prologue?
Should I continue Very Happy? Pardon the fact that it's short.

Alittle to short to give any serious reviews, my money is on maybe Billy?perhaps Wesker?check mine out, tell me what you think, its called RE:Abyss.
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PostSubject: Re: Afterwards.   Sun Feb 26, 2012 3:49 pm

00biohazard wrote:
Methsia wrote:
Prologue

He felt like his eyes were bulging out, and as he shakeably touch his cheeks he noticed tears
had gently rolled on them.

Gently was an understatement, he punched the hot ground trying to rid of the burning pain that the
tears delivered upon his face. The tears were involuntary, he did not mean to 'cry' the word even
sickened him to the core. As the salty remnants fell upon his lips he grunted at the burn and sting.


'They will pay for this.'

____________________________________

So what do you guys think so far? Who is it in the prologue?
Should I continue Very Happy? Pardon the fact that it's short.

Alittle to short to give any serious reviews, my money is on maybe Billy?perhaps Wesker?check mine out, tell me what you think, its called RE:Abyss.

Ah yeah, I'm planning on expanding it. And for sure! I've actually started reading the first Chapter.
My Dad at the instant asked me to make some Tea. Reading it now Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Afterwards.   Sun Feb 26, 2012 5:26 pm

Ill definantly keep reading. Keep it up!
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